Walt: Write a story in sequence
The Massive fall
The 14/10/12 was the day that I, Tony Dixon made the big jump from space. Well everyone calls me Fearless Tony.
I am an exotic dare devil who will do almost anything. I just can’t believe what I have accomplished so far in my life.
When I made it into space I was feeling quite nervous and I didn’t know if I should do it or not. But I knew that I had to do it because it was a once in a lifetime opportunity.
During the mission I will get told by the mission control room what to do and when to jump. They also designed a suit for me so I will not get hurt while i’m falling.
“Are you ready?”, request the Mission control room.
“Yes”, I replied.
“Ok jump!”, replied the Mission control room.
As I jumped falling deeper and deeper I noticed that the parachute wouldn’t open.
“Oh no!”, I said.
I was shocked, I was trying harder and harder to open it. I thought that it would be the end for me, but then I tugged the rip cord one more time and the parachute opened.
I can’t believe I did it!
As I landed on the ground I looked around and I saw this sign which said, New Zealand.
“Mission accomplished”, said the mission control room.
I was relieved.
No matter what, always give things a go.
2 comments:
That was a great story Amber! This story intrigued me very much.If you had the chance to do the Massive Fall would you ever do it?
Hi Crystal that would be really scary but I can't right now If was another time I still wouldn't do it because I'm not professionally trained. Would do the massive fall though?
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