Alex's suprise

Walt: Use the past tense

Alex’s surprise
On a saturday afternoon Alex and his parents George and jackie went to the zoo.  
Alex is really excited to see the Giraffes that he wouldn’t stop blabbering about it. Then Alex decided to run to the Giraffes instead of waiting around looking at the other animals.

As he was running he tripped over a banana peel.

“Whoa!’’ Alex said in a exotic shock.  

“Oww’’ marked Alex as he was rubbing his head.
As Alex got up he saw that a giraffe is about to have a baby but the trouble is the Giraffe couldn’t have the baby.

“Oh no I better tell the zoo keeper!’’ claimed Alex.

Alex tried to get out but he couldn’t then he had quite a clever idea so Alex put the idea in his head and he quickly sprinted to the tallest giraffe. Alex jumped on the Giraffes back then he climbed up it’s neck and then he lunged towards the platform and he leaped onto the platform.

Alex runned to the reception and asked where is the nearest zoo keeper.

“over their” said the receptionist.

“Thank you” said Alex.

So Alex quickly runned to the zoo keeper and told him what was happening
about the giraffe.

So the zookeeper checked the giraffe to see if the giraffe was alright and then the zookeeper told Alex that everything was alright. Alex was glad that the giraffe was ok.Then the zookeeper thanked Alex and gave him a reward.

“Thank you” Alex said.

Then Alex went to his parents and told them everything that happened on their way home.

Always be generous.